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Complete pieces: Saalim tukdey

Saalim Tukdey

Wohi din ka intezar hai
Jab aapke saamaan mein
Mere jism ke tukdey milenge
Katee hui ungliyaan haathon ko dhoondegi
Paazeib khankenge pairon ko chhedne ke liye
Surahi-si gardan mein bhar denge sharaab
Kashish aankhon ki talash mein chalee jaayegi
Bheege hue dupatte se
Paseena nichoud lena
Aapki saanson ki garmee se
Woh chheentein dhuaan ban jaayegi
Maachis ki teeli
Aag ko shaayad pehchanegi
bhi nahin

Agar yeh saamaan kaafi nahin
Tau bataa dijiye
Ab bhi kaanon ko
Khanak sunne ki gunjaish hai
Poori khaal nikaal lena
Zameen par makhmal ka chaadar achcha lagega
Zulfein bhi mor ke pankh se kum nahin
Waqt mile tau hamare baare mein soch lena
Shaayad aapki yaad-dasht laut aaye

Yeh tau maan-na padega
Aisi nazaqat aaj-kal milti kahaan hai
Kaun apni hastee mitaa deta hai
Kaun apne-aap ke tukdoun ko tarashta hai
Itne najeeb nahin hai
Quaid hai khud ki panaah mein
Maang lijiye jo chahiye
Hum apne hi kaam ke nahin rahe

~ FV

4 comments:

ana said...

Farzana,

Did the image of ChhoTi Bahu cross your mind at all when you wrote this? It crossed mine when I read it. Chilling aur bohat khoob. xo

Amandeep said...

my fingers sweat when i read about cut body parts in your articles. it has happened before... why do you write all this? how?

ana - i saw ur post. I thought of some film where i can relate. I was reminded of 'Sooraj ka saatwan ghora' -- some dialog in it... lothde... tukde...cheelein cheelein (eagles)

whatmeworry said...

FV,

If you weren't a poetess, you would be Jacqueline (Jackie) the Ripper! And Thank God for that !!!

FV said...

This seems to have affected some people; I can understand my mother being disturbed, but a couple of others who barely know me...thank you for not seeing me as some 'object' only because I write honestly and post pictures of nudes.

Ana:

Chhoti bahu has affected me deeply...but only now I can see her a trace of her...I was thinking about parts of me...

http://farzana-versey.blogspot.com/2007/06/parts-of-me.html

Amandeep:

I don't have an answer. If I could rationalise, then this would not have been here, I would be different...and don't I wish for that sometimes?

WMW:

JtR did others in...I will most likely destroy myself...

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