28.6.08

My Possessions: Mera Khazaana

Mera Khazaana

Mujhe tumse kuchch bhi na chahiye*
Mere khazaane mein bohat kuchch hai

Jholi mein hawaaein
Lipat rahi jism ko paakeezgi se
Usey kya chahiye
Sirf thodasa aanchal apni hi thandi saanson se bachne ke liye

Giraa hua aansoon phir
Nazroun mein bas jaata hai
Usey kya chahiye
Sirf aankhon ki veerani mein kuchch ras bharna

Jaam toot jaata hai
Behti hui sharaab ki boondein farsh ko behlati hai
Usey kya chahiye
Sirf kisiko nasha dena, lamhoun ke liye zamaane ko bhool jaana

Laboun se muskurahat nikal gayee hai
Jo khoya hai woh paaya hai
Usey kya chahiye
Sirf kisike laboun par apna aks dekhna

Mere khazaane mein bohat kuchch hai
Eik-eik cheez nikaal kar rakh doon tau zameen aasman ko chhoo legi

Mujhe tumse kuchch bhi na chahiye

Ho sakey tau kabhi meri zameen par qadam rakhna
Aur mere aasmaan ko apna chhat samajhna

~FV

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* This one line is from a well-known Hindi film song from the film Kanhaiya sung by Mukesh

3 comments:

Pune S said...

FV:

Mere paas lafz naheen hain aapki tareef karne ke liye.

The poem is near perfect. Its a beauty. You got to get these damn things published, pleasssssseeee!!!!

Ho sakey tau kabhi meri zameen par qadam rakhna
Aur mere aasmaan ko apna chhat samajhna


An invitation, a longing, a tease, imagery, emotional tug... amazing!

Mad mullah said...

Seculare govt bows down to Muslim thugs.Another reason for the closet jehadis like FV to celebrate.They will ignore the thuggery of fellow muslims and write on Gorkhaland.Traitors.

http://ibnlive.com/news/congress-revokes-land-transfer-order-in-jk/67965-3.html

FV said...

PS:

When I go beyond "near perfect",then I shall publish! Hey, appreciate your appreciation...
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MM:

Thanks for liking the poem and giving it a new twist with your deconstruction.