tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16761020.post5142931270986151339..comments2023-10-20T21:52:36.752+05:30Comments on Cross Connections: Sunday ka FundaFarzana Verseyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06891229615361937135noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16761020.post-26034664135738970082013-02-18T08:33:26.450+05:302013-02-18T08:33:26.450+05:30Thank you for your kind words, FV. :-) very kic...Thank you for your kind words, FV. :-) very kicked to hear them!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16761020.post-8555023614587110612013-02-18T08:15:58.521+05:302013-02-18T08:15:58.521+05:30Al:
A big thank you...thrilled to bits about this...Al:<br /><br />A big thank you...thrilled to bits about this dedication!<br /><br />Forget what it reminds me of....there are some beautiful lines. And the end...<br /><br />"unbroken fall<br />desolate comfort<br />from unseen ground"<br /><br />Nicely concluded the desolation.<br /><br />Now, please don't put me out of business!<br /><br />Kidding. I want the whole world to write. I am so proud of you, sun:-) <br />FVnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16761020.post-6372049207409018342013-02-18T01:28:56.080+05:302013-02-18T01:28:56.080+05:30FV, my first stab at some poetry ...thanks for the...FV, my first stab at some poetry ...thanks for the inspiration and support. dedicated to you. :-) <br /><br />(Any resemblance to Vogon poetry purely coincidental :-) -- apologies in advance).<br /><br />open mysteries,<br />burning questions,<br />impending adventures,<br />holding hands<br />preserve the aroma<br />set it in stone<br />together eternal<br />not a moment alone<br /><br />mice and humans<br />best laid plans<br />generous hope<br />solitary rewards<br />always together<br />always alone<br />feeding delusions<br />trains of thought<br />last stop: disaster<br /><br />momentary lapse<br />harsh words <br />poor judgement<br />false memories<br />broken faith<br />never ending storm<br />drifting alone<br />reaching out <br />never within reach<br />overstretched to miss<br />fall in the dark<br />unseen ground<br />touch of love<br />a faithful friend<br />a rabbit's foot<br />a dog's breath<br />extinguished<br />cruel time<br />fading memory<br />win the game<br />play solitaire <br />thoughts and words<br />washed and worn out<br />with tears and rain<br />memories framed<br />guilty as charged<br />etched with fear<br />build walls around<br />paint the mirror<br />break it down<br />easier to admire<br />unbroken fall<br />desolate comfort<br />from unseen ground<br /><br />-AlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16761020.post-70123127729525405142013-02-18T00:11:22.415+05:302013-02-18T00:11:22.415+05:30FV, Thx for the nice tune. Resembled this song in ...FV, Thx for the nice tune. Resembled this song in another planet long ago and far away...nowadays the signboard only seems to read:<br /><br />"love 10,2231 miles<br /> desire 6783 miles<br /> pain Every 56 miles" <br /><br />so one takes the bicycle off that road to avoid pain..oh well...<br /><br />-AlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com