"The difference between false memories and true ones is the same as for jewels: it is always the false ones that look the most real, the most brilliant."
FV, my first stab at some poetry ...thanks for the inspiration and support. dedicated to you. :-)
(Any resemblance to Vogon poetry purely coincidental :-) -- apologies in advance).
open mysteries, burning questions, impending adventures, holding hands preserve the aroma set it in stone together eternal not a moment alone
mice and humans best laid plans generous hope solitary rewards always together always alone feeding delusions trains of thought last stop: disaster
momentary lapse harsh words poor judgement false memories broken faith never ending storm drifting alone reaching out never within reach overstretched to miss fall in the dark unseen ground touch of love a faithful friend a rabbit's foot a dog's breath extinguished cruel time fading memory win the game play solitaire thoughts and words washed and worn out with tears and rain memories framed guilty as charged etched with fear build walls around paint the mirror break it down easier to admire unbroken fall desolate comfort from unseen ground
FV, Thx for the nice tune. Resembled this song in another planet long ago and far away...nowadays the signboard only seems to read:
ReplyDelete"love 10,2231 miles
desire 6783 miles
pain Every 56 miles"
so one takes the bicycle off that road to avoid pain..oh well...
-Al
FV, my first stab at some poetry ...thanks for the inspiration and support. dedicated to you. :-)
ReplyDelete(Any resemblance to Vogon poetry purely coincidental :-) -- apologies in advance).
open mysteries,
burning questions,
impending adventures,
holding hands
preserve the aroma
set it in stone
together eternal
not a moment alone
mice and humans
best laid plans
generous hope
solitary rewards
always together
always alone
feeding delusions
trains of thought
last stop: disaster
momentary lapse
harsh words
poor judgement
false memories
broken faith
never ending storm
drifting alone
reaching out
never within reach
overstretched to miss
fall in the dark
unseen ground
touch of love
a faithful friend
a rabbit's foot
a dog's breath
extinguished
cruel time
fading memory
win the game
play solitaire
thoughts and words
washed and worn out
with tears and rain
memories framed
guilty as charged
etched with fear
build walls around
paint the mirror
break it down
easier to admire
unbroken fall
desolate comfort
from unseen ground
-Al
Al:
ReplyDeleteA big thank you...thrilled to bits about this dedication!
Forget what it reminds me of....there are some beautiful lines. And the end...
"unbroken fall
desolate comfort
from unseen ground"
Nicely concluded the desolation.
Now, please don't put me out of business!
Kidding. I want the whole world to write. I am so proud of you, sun:-)
Thank you for your kind words, FV. :-) very kicked to hear them!
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